This is Gisele Caroline Bündchen, she's a very famous model. She's in her twenties. She's tall and thin. She has long, straight blond hair. Her eyes are blue. She's wearing a black coat.
She's was born in 20/7/1980, in Horizontina (RS). Today she lives in Los Angeles, today she works for colcci doing advertisements for clothes and work with model too. She' s the woman, i asked for GOD! She is very beautiful.!!
Well done! :-)
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1. She's was born (She was born...)
2. Today she lives (Today, she lives...)
3. ...Los Angeles, today she works... (...Los Angeles,AND she works for Colcci...)
4. ...work with model too (...work AS model, too)
5. i asked (...I asked...)
My congrats Pedro, you did such a nice writing!
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